Wow, what a great start Henry. This shows real potential. You have developed an interesting house style and constructed a convincing text that has all the elements of media language one would expect. You have even manipulated the original image to make it more dramatic and intense. Well done. To improve perhaps you should consider aligning text on the right hand edge on right hand align so that it runs parallel with the edge of the page. Otherwise a very pleasing product!
Wow, what a great start Henry. This shows real potential. You have developed an interesting house style and constructed a convincing text that has all the elements of media language one would expect. You have even manipulated the original image to make it more dramatic and intense. Well done. To improve perhaps you should consider aligning text on the right hand edge on right hand align so that it runs parallel with the edge of the page. Otherwise a very pleasing product!
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